A "Loving" God
speterson085
03 Apr, 2014 12:38 AMLife is such a beautiful thing we say. To the artist, how can we ever repay? Shall we be your toys, oh lord? for you, shall we entertain? Please pay us no heed lord,we thank you for your disdain. You need not speak lord,we are not worthy of such attention. Like loyal pets; we lick your hand, even if it is the source of our infliction. War, molestation, famine, and disease only strengthen our faith in you. How could someone not see this too? We grovel at your feet lord, how dare they call you a fraud! How dare they speak against thee! a kind and loving god.
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Post a Comment28 May, 2014 06:10 AM
I love this! The atheist feeling from this poem is spot on; a mocking, brutal, matter-of-fact, and sarcastic observation of an all knowing God who ought to do more to ease our sufferings. But all of the worship and kiss ass won't stop a holocaust, or a war...
02 Jun, 2014 02:18 PM
Thank you! I wrote this when I was feeling a bit down and mad. That is when most of my inspiration kicks in ^__^ Thank you for commenting.