The one that...
Raven Wolff
23 Oct, 2012 10:33 PMTake my hand, Drips of tears. Lead me out of here. Fear, everywhere. Tears continue to pour. I start to fade away. What was once Bright, quickly turns Black. My heart? Beaten. My eye? Burn with tears. My wrist? What wrist? My hope is gone, done with. It left when you did. Now I'm waiting. Waiting on something that will never come someone who will never show. slowly dying. Slowly fading. Bright goes to dark. Light to black. Happy to dead. Smile to frown. Me to nothing. You to.. The one that killed me.
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Comments
Post a Comment06 Dec, 2012 03:23 PM
i love this site it describes how i feel inside
13 Jan, 2013 09:21 PM
I love all of your poems they tell me how i feel in such a beautiful way.
02 Mar, 2013 10:27 PM
..im not much of a poem's kind of guy but..your poems are amazing..keep up the good work...
09 Apr, 2013 10:13 PM
beautiful...simply beautiful!!
18 Apr, 2013 12:24 PM
i love this it is so good
25 May, 2013 09:45 PM
awesome? scary? brilliant! i say yes to all of them...i think this poems explains alot of feelings that im to scared to face
04 Oct, 2013 06:01 AM
i feel really good when i read these poems i also write them down in a note book to remind me tat i have something to live for but not really because to tell u the truth i use to cut my wrist too
04 Oct, 2013 06:19 PM
This poem is amazing!
17 Oct, 2013 05:00 PM
raven don't feel alone ive been bulled all my life an im still getin bulled so yeah ur cool bro I love the poem
12 Nov, 2013 06:22 PM
beautiful
27 Mar, 2014 05:26 PM
Sitting here reading these while listening to stone sour and its making me have tears
22 Apr, 2014 06:29 AM
Great poem I enjoy your style of writing. I'm new to this site and maybe you can help me out. How would I be able to get on my profile of follow poets?
12 Nov, 2014 02:50 PM
A good good read....simple and yet so so...unfolding and difficult at the same time...the ending is fabulous.....
04 Dec, 2014 03:07 AM
damn its so true right now about me and what im going though in life i just got walked out on and my son ripped away from me its insane ... lost and confused ...
19 Dec, 2014 05:56 AM
Amazing ... You describe it pretty well ...
07 Apr, 2015 12:57 PM
Really cool. Where do you get the creativity for it???
08 May, 2015 03:20 AM
I love all the poems and I also love darkness
11 May, 2015 04:13 PM
that's how I'm dying and feeling right now
14 May, 2015 12:29 PM
Amazing..
02 Jun, 2015 04:52 PM
Simply wOw <3
02 Aug, 2015 05:52 AM
I'm in awe with this site!! It tells my untold story. <3
22 Oct, 2015 03:43 AM
I have read this again and again since I joined this site. Beautiful, I love it and I love you.
03 May, 2016 04:31 PM
Honestly I love this, I love all the poems. I think it is perfect that all of you are expressing what you feel. Seriously lets be honest though the people that make rude comments are just taking time out of their pathetic life to think about you. so love this with passion. Keep writing poems I love them!!
08 Jun, 2016 01:57 PM
I cut my wrists to this poem, it's so beautiful. Makes my suicide attempts a lot easier... much like Sylvia Plath, I stick my head in an oven, much like a raven, I'm black inside.
20 Jun, 2016 04:39 PM
That was beautiful it makes my pain fell a lot essayer to deal with and life as well. I don't know much about poems but i understand what u go through.I can't fell anything but pain and i'm already faded into the darkness.
12 Jul, 2016 11:52 AM
So moving awesome
23 May, 2017 02:27 AM
I always cry reading poems on here. Firstly because they describe how I feel in such a lovely way, which I could never do myself. And secondly because others are suffering too, and I don't know if they're okay now